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Ien Nivens's avatar

You are a master of the non-sequitor. Tickles my whole spectrum.

Mike Oppenheim's avatar

I am grinning ear-to-ear! Thanks!

Celeste Kirkland's avatar

The ending made everything worthwhile. Hope you're keeping a journal of all the bright things your offspring come up with!

SPVenkata's avatar

I second that, Mike!

Furkhan Dandia's avatar

Love this one!

Crystal Cunningham's avatar

This is so full of “quotable” lines I’ve been jotting them down for material. Imitation is the highest form of praise ;)

I read this twice and hitting it up a third time.

Ps- been trying to give u a free subscription so u can critique my fucking awesome poetry - publicly is fine- no shame here.

I can’t piece together enough to email you. So critique like we’re chillin in Red Sands in Temp:)

My goal was 25 poems for a chapbook but I’m up to 60 so I think I can look into a book.

Ps - nobody teaches how to overcome the fear of completely revealing a deep honesty about one’s self to a publisher. did you learn this getting your MFA?